balloon powered car

 On Thursday me, tadhg and Kayla made balloon powered car, our car didn't drive that well. it wouldn't move i think our wheels weren't on properly so the car would not move so we took it inside to fix it but then the bell ring.  

Cook cove walk

The walk up cook cove 

Ah we have reached the first stop up cook cove I stop to look out over the beach and camp site.Then the teacher yells come on everybody let's get walking again so we do I was so tired from the first bit of walk that we did and i feel like i'm not going to make to the end but i keep going.”Yes final some down hill”oh no uphill again.My feet was so sore and im so tired there is no way i’m going to make to this i’m thinking I stop to catch my breath and get a drink of water my friend stop to wait for me what a good friend i’m thinking.Then me and my friend start walking again.

Now we are at our next stop I’ve catch up with some of classmates and we all start walk together we are all so tired and our feet are sore but we having.lots of fun their telling jokes and we have a good time we reach the downhill part and i’m so happy now that it’s all downhill.we make to the flat bit there was some uphill and downhill.

Yes there is cooks cove i shouted to my friends and we started running. We jumped a fence and we are here.i was so happy to have finished.We had some food and we all went for a little swim and then we went back to our camp and had some more food.  

Max 

^This is my writing sample From a term 2.

v This is my writing level from term 2.And im trying to get better at the sentence structure and punctuation 

Nau mai, haere mai!